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Bear Hunt

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Hi there!

Click on the video link below to watch Michael Rosen perform ‘We’re going on a bear hunt’. It’s ace! Then use the comments box to have a go at writing your own version of ‘We’re going on a………………..’ If you need some extra help, have a look at what some kids have written about their journey around school at the bottom of the page. Can you do better?

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48 Responses to “Bear Hunt”

  1.   Ellie Ellie Says:

    were going on our first school trip,
    were going to rand farm.
    It’s not a very nice day know,
    and you can hardly see the clouds.
    Were on the bus and having fun,
    but theres a scary tunnel ahead.
    People are scared but we have to make a choice…
    we can’t go over it,
    we can’t go under it,
    yes we will have to go through it!
    We are finally through the scary tunnel,
    we are all back to our games.
    I’m not thinking about the trip though,
    and I don’t know how it will go.

  2.   Mrs. Neilson Says:

    Year 2
    St Josephs Catholic Primary School
    September 2008

  3.   connor Says:

    Uh – uh a tree
    We can’t go over it.
    we can’t go under it.
    oh o!
    we’ve go to go through it.

  4.   Mollie Cox Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt,
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    What a beautiful day,
    We’re not scared.
    Oh no a bridge, a big wavery bridge…
    We can’t go over it,
    We can’t go under it,
    Oh no we will have to go on it
    Wobble wobble wobble wobble!

  5.   maciej Says:

    Uh uh a lion!
    we cant go over it.
    we cant go under it.
    oh no!
    we will have to go through it.

  6.   Daniella Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt.
    We’re not scared.
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    Uh-uh a bat.
    A big grey bat.
    We can’t go over it.
    We cant go under it.
    Oh no!We’ve go to go through it.

  7.   Reuben Zachariah Wilding Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt
    We’re not scard what a beautiful day Uh-uh a fox
    We cant go over it
    We can’t go under it
    Oh no we’ll have to go around it
    shhhhhh
    We’re going on a bear hunt
    We’re going to cach a big one
    We’re not scared
    ohno a bear.

  8.   Kye Grainger Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt,
    We’re not scared.
    On no a tree a big brown tree…
    We can’t go over it,
    We can’t go under it,
    On no we will have to go through it!
    Crunch crunch CRUNCH.

  9.   Anna Welzandt Says:

    UH – uh a wall
    We can’t go over it,
    We cant go under it
    Oh no weve got to go through it!

  10.   Aoife Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt.
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    We’re not scared.Oh no squelchy mud.
    We can’t go over it.
    We can’t go under it.
    Oh no! We’ve got to go through it.
    squelch sqwerch squelch sqwearch.

    We’re going on a bear hunt.
    We.re not scared.
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    Oh no! A tree.
    We can’t go over it.
    We can’t go under it.
    Oh no! We have to go around it.
    Bend Bend Bend

  11.   Caitlin. Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt.
    We’re not scared.
    What a beautiful day.
    We’re going to cach a big one.
    Oh no a monster.
    A big scary monster.
    We cant go over it.
    We cant go under it.
    Oh no we’ll have to go through it.
    Squelch squerch squelch squerch.
    Were going on a bear hunt
    We’re not scard.
    We’re going to cach a big one.
    Oh no a fox a big brown fox.
    We cant go over it.
    We cant go under it.
    Oh no well have to go through it.
    Tiptoe Tiptoe Tiptoe.

  12.   Paige Summer Mack Says:

    We,re all going on a bear hunt
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    What a beautiful day,
    We’re not scared!
    Oh no a road…
    We can,t go over it,
    We can’t go under it,
    Oh no we will have to go across it!
    Stamp stamp stamp!

  13.   Miss Warvill Says:

    These are fabulous year 2, well done!

  14.   Bailey at Weelsby Primary Says:

    We’re Going on a Giant Hunt

    We’re going on a Giant Hunt.
    We’re going to catch an enormous one!
    we’re not scared what a sunny day.
    Oh no! A scary river!
    We can’t go over it,
    We can’t go under it.
    splishy splashy splishy splashy!

  15.   George at Weelsby Primary Says:

    We’re Going on a Bear Hunt
    We’re going on a bear hunt.
    We’re going to catch a big one!
    We’re not scared.
    What a glorious day.
    Oh no! A jungle!
    We can’t go over it,
    We can’t go under it.
    Oh no! We’ve got to go through it.
    Swishy, swashy, swishy swashy.

    By George

  16.   Guilherme at Weelsby Primary Says:

    we re going on a dragon hunt
    We’re going to catch an enormous one.
    What a beautiful day!
    Oh no a river,
    a cold we can,t go over it we can,t go through it.
    Oh no we ve got to go through it.
    Splish splash splish splash

  17.   Adam at Weelsby Primary School Says:

    We’re going on a bear hunt.

    We’re not scared.
    what a lovey day!

    Oh no!
    Long wavy grass,
    We can’t go over it we can’t go under it.
    Oh no! we have to go through it
    Swish, swosh, swish.

  18.   Paige at Weelsby Primary School Says:

    We’re Going on a Polar Bear Hunt

    We’re going on a polar bear hunt.
    We’re going to catch a little one!
    We’re not afraid.
    What a sunny day.
    Oh no! A tunnel. A dark tunnel.
    We cant go over it,.
    We can’t go through it.
    Oh no we have to go through it.
    Woo WooooWooooo!

  19.   John at Weelsby Primary Says:

    We’re going on a Gorilla Hunt
    We’re going on a Gorilla hunt.
    We’re going to catch a ginormous one!
    We’re not scared.
    What a gorgeous day.
    Oh no! A muddy pond!
    We’re not scared.
    We can’t go over it,
    we can’t go under it,
    Oh no! We’ve got to go through it.
    Squelch, squirch, sqelch, squirch.

  20.   Corri at Weelsby Primary School Says:

    We’re going on a dinosaur hunt.
    We’re going to catch a T-REX!
    We’re NOT afraid.
    what a lovely day
    oh no a jungle.
    We can’t go over it
    We can’t go under it
    Oh NO! We’ve got to go through it!
    ROOAAAARRRRR!!! SSSSSssssssss!

  21.   Declan At Weelsby Primary Says:

    We’re Going on a Bear Hunt
    We’re going on Bear Hunt.
    we’re going to catch a big one!
    What a beautiful day!
    We’re not scared.
    Oh no! Quick sand!
    we cant go over it,
    we cant go under it.
    Oh no! We’ ve got to go through it.
    Swishy, swoshy, swishy, swashy.

  22.   Anonymous Says:

    To Weelsby Primary School,
    Fabulous work! I’m very proud of you!
    From
    Mrs Carr

  23.   Katy k Says:

    Gran can you rap?

    You can rap about Molly,
    You can rap about Me,
    You can rap about Katie,
    And evan Dee,

  24.   Eve. S Says:

    Eve’s Rap
    Gran was in the shop,
    she was buyng a new mop,
    so I tapped her on the,
    shoulder to she if she could bop,
    Gran can you bop? Can you bop gran?,
    she opened one eye and said to me man!
    I’m the best bopping gran this world’s,
    ever seen I’m a tip top, slip slop, bop bop, queen.

  25.   Aimee K Says:

    Gran can you eat
    Gran was in the street,
    Dancing to the beat.
    When i tapped her on the shoulder to see she could eat.
    Gran can you eat,can you eat,can you gran
    She opend one eye and said to me MAN
    I`m the best eating gran this worlds ever seen
    I`m a tip top slip slap eat eat queen.

  26.   Katy k katie w Says:

    katy,s rap
    You can rap about Hector,
    You can rap about Ming ,
    You can rap about Sprat ,
    and evan P.C.Jim

  27.   Katy k katie w Says:

    katy,s rap
    You can rap about Hector,
    You can rap about Ming ,
    You can rap about Sprat ,
    and evan P.C.Jim

  28.   Katy k katie w Says:

    katy,s rap
    You can rap about Hector,
    You can rap about Ming ,
    You can rap about Sprat ,
    and evan P.C.Jim

  29.   Katy k katie w Says:

    katy,s rap
    You can rap about Hector,
    You can rap about Ming ,
    You can rap about Sprat ,
    and evan P.C.Jim

  30.   Charlotte Says:

    Gran can you eat
    Gran was in the street
    dancing to the beat
    when I tappd her on the
    shoulder to see ifshe could eat
    Gran can you eat can you eat can you Gran
    she opend oen eye and she said to me man
    Iam the best eating Gran this worlds ever seen
    I,m a TIP TOP SLIP SLAP EAT EAT queen

    Gran can you eat can you eat can you Gran she open one eye and

  31.   Bethany.D. Says:

    You can wrap aout a table,
    You can wrap about a book,
    You can wrap about paper,
    And even a cup.

    You can wrap about humphrey,
    You can wrap about a fish,
    You can about children,
    And even a dish.
    You can wrap about people,
    You can wrap about a smile,
    You can wrap about a face,
    And even a child.

  32.   Liberty .T. Says:

    Gran was in her bed

    Gran was in her bed
    the pillow was red
    when i tapped her on the shoulder
    to see if she could thread
    Gran can you thread, can you thread, Can you Gran
    And she opened one eye
    and she said to me man
    I am the best threading Gran this worlds ever seen
    I am a hip-hop,slip-slop thread thread queen

    She threaded past the school
    She threaded on the hills
    She threaded in the playground
    and she threaded past Bill

    She threaded past my locker
    She threaded past the class
    She threaded past the hopscotch
    and even the grass

  33.   Rebecca C and Harriet D Says:

    you can rap about

    You can rap about trees
    You can rap about bees
    You can rap about bushes
    and even leaves

    You can rap about puddles
    You can rap about rain
    You can rap about water
    and even pain

    Gran was in her bed
    resting her head
    When I tapped her on her shoulder to see if she could spread
    Gran can you spread? can you spread? can you gran
    and she opened one eye and said to me “MAN”
    I am the best spreading gran this world
    I am a flip flop hip hop spread spread queen

  34.   Katie W Says:

    Gran can you rap?

    You can rap about a table,
    you can rap about a chair,
    you can rap about pencils,
    and even a chair,

    You can rap about hector,
    You can rap about ming,
    You can rap about sprat,
    and even p.c jim,

  35.   Harry H and Megan M. Says:

    Grandma was in school
    When she broke a rule
    When l tapped her on the shoulder to see lf she was cool
    Gran are you cool? Are you cool? Are you gran?
    She opened one eye and she said to me man!
    lm the coolest gran this worlds ever seen
    l’m a tip top,slip slop cool cool queen.

  36.   Liberty .T. Says:

    Gran was in her bed

    Gran was in her bed,
    the pillow was red,
    when i tapped her on the shoulder
    to see if she could thread.
    Gran can you thread? Can you thread? Can you Gran?
    And she opened one eye
    and she said to me man
    I am the best threading Gran this worlds ever seen
    I am a hip-hop,slip-slop thread thread, queen.

    She threaded past the school
    She threaded on the hills
    She threaded in the playground
    and she threaded past Bill

    She threaded past my locker
    She threaded past the class
    She threaded past the hopscotch
    and even the grass

  37.   Abigail M Says:

    Abigail’s Rap

    You can rap about children
    You can rap about Ming
    You can rap about Hector
    and even PC Jim.

    You can rap about Tema
    You can rap about Sprat
    You can rap about a Lema
    and even a Cat

  38.   emily Says:

    it is funny and stupid. who would like that. maybey a baby.

  39.   martins sidelskis Says:

    That was good, I liked the bit when he said it was a beautiful day! You are a great actor!

  40.   courtney avison Says:

    I like the bear hunt where it was the mud and when there was THE CAVE. ITS FANTASTIC AND IT IS GREAT AND I LIKE IT. ITS GREAT

  41.   natalia Says:

    it was funny

  42.   emily Says:

    i am going to school,
    to do lots of work.
    what a lovely day,
    i love school.
    oh no,
    cement.
    i cant go over it,
    i cant go under it.
    oh no,
    ive got to go through it!
    stick stuck stick stuck.

  43.   kally day Says:

    I like the bear hunt where the man went though the mud IT WAS EXCITING.

  44.   jessica taylor Says:

    It was funny. I really like it. I like the voices.

  45.   courtney whyte Says:

    hello my name is courtney i loved the bit on the bearhunt where that man said where he said where going to go on a bear hunt

  46.   reece costello Says:

    we’re goig on school hunt
    we’re going to catch a teacher
    that is so grumpy,the end

  47.   nicole bruce Says:

    i loved all ov it
    nicole

  48.   nicole bruce Says:

    i loved it

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