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Bear Hunt

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Hi there!

Click on the video link below to watch Michael Rosen perform ‘We’re going on a bear hunt’. It’s ace! Then use the comments box to have a go at writing your own version of ‘We’re going on a………………..’ If you need some extra help, have a look at what some kids have written about their journey around school at the bottom of the page. Can you do better?

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22 Responses to “Bear Hunt”

  1.   Ellie Ellie Says:

    were going on our first school trip,
    were going to rand farm.
    It’s not a very nice day know,
    and you can hardly see the clouds.
    Were on the bus and having fun,
    but theres a scary tunnel ahead.
    People are scared but we have to make a choice…
    we can’t go over it,
    we can’t go under it,
    yes we will have to go through it!
    We are finally through the scary tunnel,
    we are all back to our games.
    I’m not thinking about the trip though,
    and I don’t know how it will go.

  2.   Mrs. Neilson Says:

    Year 2
    St Josephs Catholic Primary School
    September 2008

  3.   connor Says:

    Uh - uh a tree
    We can’t go over it.
    we can’t go under it.
    oh o!
    we’ve go to go through it.

  4.   Mollie Cox Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt,
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    What a beautiful day,
    We’re not scared.
    Oh no a bridge, a big wavery bridge…
    We can’t go over it,
    We can’t go under it,
    Oh no we will have to go on it
    Wobble wobble wobble wobble!

  5.   maciej Says:

    Uh uh a lion!
    we cant go over it.
    we cant go under it.
    oh no!
    we will have to go through it.

  6.   Daniella Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt.
    We’re not scared.
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    Uh-uh a bat.
    A big grey bat.
    We can’t go over it.
    We cant go under it.
    Oh no!We’ve go to go through it.

  7.   Reuben Zachariah Wilding Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt
    We’re not scard what a beautiful day Uh-uh a fox
    We cant go over it
    We can’t go under it
    Oh no we’ll have to go around it
    shhhhhh
    We’re going on a bear hunt
    We’re going to cach a big one
    We’re not scared
    ohno a bear.

  8.   Kye Grainger Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt,
    We’re not scared.
    On no a tree a big brown tree…
    We can’t go over it,
    We can’t go under it,
    On no we will have to go through it!
    Crunch crunch CRUNCH.

  9.   Anna Welzandt Says:

    UH - uh a wall
    We can’t go over it,
    We cant go under it
    Oh no weve got to go through it!

  10.   Aoife Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt.
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    We’re not scared.Oh no squelchy mud.
    We can’t go over it.
    We can’t go under it.
    Oh no! We’ve got to go through it.
    squelch sqwerch squelch sqwearch.

    We’re going on a bear hunt.
    We.re not scared.
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    Oh no! A tree.
    We can’t go over it.
    We can’t go under it.
    Oh no! We have to go around it.
    Bend Bend Bend

  11.   Caitlin. Says:

    We’re all going on a bear hunt.
    We’re not scared.
    What a beautiful day.
    We’re going to cach a big one.
    Oh no a monster.
    A big scary monster.
    We cant go over it.
    We cant go under it.
    Oh no we’ll have to go through it.
    Squelch squerch squelch squerch.
    Were going on a bear hunt
    We’re not scard.
    We’re going to cach a big one.
    Oh no a fox a big brown fox.
    We cant go over it.
    We cant go under it.
    Oh no well have to go through it.
    Tiptoe Tiptoe Tiptoe.

  12.   Paige Summer Mack Says:

    We,re all going on a bear hunt
    We’re going to catch a big one.
    What a beautiful day,
    We’re not scared!
    Oh no a road…
    We can,t go over it,
    We can’t go under it,
    Oh no we will have to go across it!
    Stamp stamp stamp!

  13.   Miss Warvill Says:

    These are fabulous year 2, well done!

  14.   Bailey at Weelsby Primary Says:

    We’re Going on a Giant Hunt

    We’re going on a Giant Hunt.
    We’re going to catch an enormous one!
    we’re not scared what a sunny day.
    Oh no! A scary river!
    We can’t go over it,
    We can’t go under it.
    splishy splashy splishy splashy!

  15.   George at Weelsby Primary Says:

    We’re Going on a Bear Hunt
    We’re going on a bear hunt.
    We’re going to catch a big one!
    We’re not scared.
    What a glorious day.
    Oh no! A jungle!
    We can’t go over it,
    We can’t go under it.
    Oh no! We’ve got to go through it.
    Swishy, swashy, swishy swashy.

    By George

  16.   Guilherme at Weelsby Primary Says:

    we re going on a dragon hunt
    We’re going to catch an enormous one.
    What a beautiful day!
    Oh no a river,
    a cold we can,t go over it we can,t go through it.
    Oh no we ve got to go through it.
    Splish splash splish splash

  17.   Adam at Weelsby Primary School Says:

    We’re going on a bear hunt.

    We’re not scared.
    what a lovey day!

    Oh no!
    Long wavy grass,
    We can’t go over it we can’t go under it.
    Oh no! we have to go through it
    Swish, swosh, swish.

  18.   Paige at Weelsby Primary School Says:

    We’re Going on a Polar Bear Hunt

    We’re going on a polar bear hunt.
    We’re going to catch a little one!
    We’re not afraid.
    What a sunny day.
    Oh no! A tunnel. A dark tunnel.
    We cant go over it,.
    We can’t go through it.
    Oh no we have to go through it.
    Woo WooooWooooo!

  19.   John at Weelsby Primary Says:

    We’re going on a Gorilla Hunt
    We’re going on a Gorilla hunt.
    We’re going to catch a ginormous one!
    We’re not scared.
    What a gorgeous day.
    Oh no! A muddy pond!
    We’re not scared.
    We can’t go over it,
    we can’t go under it,
    Oh no! We’ve got to go through it.
    Squelch, squirch, sqelch, squirch.

  20.   Corri at Weelsby Primary School Says:

    We’re going on a dinosaur hunt.
    We’re going to catch a T-REX!
    We’re NOT afraid.
    what a lovely day
    oh no a jungle.
    We can’t go over it
    We can’t go under it
    Oh NO! We’ve got to go through it!
    ROOAAAARRRRR!!! SSSSSssssssss!

  21.   Declan At Weelsby Primary Says:

    We’re Going on a Bear Hunt
    We’re going on Bear Hunt.
    we’re going to catch a big one!
    What a beautiful day!
    We’re not scared.
    Oh no! Quick sand!
    we cant go over it,
    we cant go under it.
    Oh no! We’ ve got to go through it.
    Swishy, swoshy, swishy, swashy.

  22.   Anonymous Says:

    To Weelsby Primary School,
    Fabulous work! I’m very proud of you!
    From
    Mrs Carr

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